my friend has a brother, a
dark plum-blue boy; one weekend
i called and it was him and i said,
"hey lincoln have you found the end of the world yet?"
marseilles, the dashing lines on highways,
treacle and turpentine curdling in our palms--
oh! we laughed gloriously then, and
i can hold you closest when
i have no idea what we're talking about.
"hey janie here's sixpence,"
"hey lincoln you make a perfect wheelwright,"
"hey janie you make time displeased,"
"hey lincoln here's experience,"
hey suddenly we're dispersed over a
plaza of spiral cord, making purchases of
tin-wine and lollipop wire.
arms full i laugh and i like
to fight with you over real things
and i like to make up.
purchases
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ReplyDeletei nearly passed over the sidebar.
ReplyDeletejanie, i crave speaking to you.
i hope you see fireworks tonight.
i saw prince caspian, and i was thinking about england, and i remembered your susan story (if i remembered correctly)... and i realized i wanted to read your lucy story more than i wanted to watch prince caspian.
not sincerely (that would be blasphemy) but maybe it's a susan thing?
dammit. i thought i fixed the "lucy" mistake the first time.
ReplyDeletemy narnia ignorance is exposed. i'm not going to try covering up a second time.
i love comments. i love tala.
ReplyDeletei was (also i guess because of price caspian) thinking about that story and how i never finished it, and if anybody remembered it and if i should finish it...
I remember it.
ReplyDeleteIt's one of my favorites. I think it's the reason I kept reading your stuff.
(I made so many grammatical errors in that comment. I hate myself now.)
ReplyDeletewrist cutting orgy...
ReplyDeleteby the way if i call you "janie nautilus" by accident one day just mentioning it you never know forgive me
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